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I never thought I would be in this position . Even considering such a notion. ****** ,the most grotesque of actions, But it would be a mercy. Trade the loud intolerable menacing world for the peace of that dark abyss . It would just take one maybe two swift strikes Then life would just drain, then a cold sensation would consume you till your numb. "That's what I've read", seems painless enough... It hurt for a bit but it wasn't the worst of pains The water is quiet soothing I feel all the aching just wash away smooth as velvet and just as dark The chill is refreshing, my sight is weaning as is my sense of touch I let out a sigh. So tired so..vee-rr..y... t-ii..r... 'this is my saving grace'
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Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 3:27 PM UTC
A Saving grace?
I never thought I would be in this position . Even considering such a notion. ****** ,the most grotesque of actions, But it would be a mercy. Trade the loud intolerable menacing world for the peace of that dark abyss . It would just take one maybe two swift strikes Then life would just drain, then a cold sensation would consume you till your numb. "That's what I've read", seems painless enough... It hurt for a bit but it wasn't the worst of pains The water is quiet soothing I feel all the aching just wash away smooth as velvet and just as dark The chill is refreshing, my sight is weaning as is my sense of touch I let out a sigh. So tired so..vee-rr..y... t-ii..r... 'this is my saving grace'
One of my dark state poems I'm not in any way condoning suicide I just wrote this to show the rational of it
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26/M/South African
Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 3:27 PM UTC
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