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Precise and organized is the place we live. A chair, a city, a country, a world, a galaxy, all have systems of organization. Running like clockwork, precise and intricate, everything in the universe is perfect. But I don’t understand why. I think to myself: Why is the universe not a messy soup? How is everything so independent physically? The universe was once chaotic, random, and tumultuous. But now it is neat and calm. We live in a tranquil era of the universe where such a world we inhabit can exist. This entropy has served us well. We don’t have to worry. Everything will be alright. Yet as I write this war and struggle encompass our earth. People are dying in the hands of their loved ones. Screams, tears, shots, explosions. These frightening realities come from a beautiful blue marble of a planet. Life requires just right conditions to grow and evolve. Yet life is the sole imperfection in this universe.
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 3:03 PM UTC
Universe
Precise and organized is the place we live. A chair, a city, a country, a world, a galaxy, all have systems of organization. Running like clockwork, precise and intricate, everything in the universe is perfect. But I don’t understand why. I think to myself: Why is the universe not a messy soup? How is everything so independent physically? The universe was once chaotic, random, and tumultuous. But now it is neat and calm. We live in a tranquil era of the universe where such a world we inhabit can exist. This entropy has served us well. We don’t have to worry. Everything will be alright. Yet as I write this war and struggle encompass our earth. People are dying in the hands of their loved ones. Screams, tears, shots, explosions. These frightening realities come from a beautiful blue marble of a planet. Life requires just right conditions to grow and evolve. Yet life is the sole imperfection in this universe.
joshuadublin
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 3:03 PM UTC
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