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Hey there, are you new here? So how come we never met? Me, I'm always late for work No matter which alarm I set So tell me whats your name? I'm Heloise, sorry, you go first. After Heloise the writer, hey you were close, could have been worse. I'm soaked I wasn't thinking, we were gonna get some rain. And in the rush to get the bus, I dropped my fare right down the drain. You look like you walked miles. You must be soaked through to the skin. I am a waitress at Dukes Diner. You should try us, come on in. So how come I haven't seen you, Are we talking the same place? Cos I'm sure I would remember, such a handsome face. Say what time is it you come in? Because I get a break at two. I could come and join you in the park, if thats ok with you? How about tomorrow? Are sure that its ok? I dont want to be too pushy, If its not ok just say. Ok so now I'm blushing. Are you sure that you dont mind? You are? I know, I'm rushing, But it works the best I find.
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Apr 28, 2010
Apr 28, 2010 at 7:07 PM UTC
What she said.
Hey there, are you new here? So how come we never met? Me, I'm always late for work No matter which alarm I set So tell me whats your name? I'm Heloise, sorry, you go first. After Heloise the writer, hey you were close, could have been worse. I'm soaked I wasn't thinking, we were gonna get some rain. And in the rush to get the bus, I dropped my fare right down the drain. You look like you walked miles. You must be soaked through to the skin. I am a waitress at Dukes Diner. You should try us, come on in. So how come I haven't seen you, Are we talking the same place? Cos I'm sure I would remember, such a handsome face. Say what time is it you come in? Because I get a break at two. I could come and join you in the park, if thats ok with you? How about tomorrow? Are sure that its ok? I dont want to be too pushy, If its not ok just say. Ok so now I'm blushing. Are you sure that you dont mind? You are? I know, I'm rushing, But it works the best I find.
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a-thomas-hawkins
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Apr 28, 2010
Apr 28, 2010 at 7:07 PM UTC
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