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You Are Profoundly Skilled at Impressing Yourself

Even though it’s new

the wires of your cage door

still rattle.

Cold inside, you demand

a constant 71 degrees.

Pop and techno

hit me in the face

like that puff of air

at the eye doctor:

jarring

distracting

slightly painful.

 

Peculiar keepsakes on display;

like that odd family photo

ridiculously large

lunging its welcome

from the foyer wall.

Your plump daughters wearing ringlets

and uncertain smiles

hang between your

arrogant head.

You.

Everywhere.

A shrine.

 

We sit outside with mixed drinks

you talk about your neighbor

the sushi king and how

this neighborhood

means you’ve irrevocably arrived.

Meanwhile, I am bored.

Terribly

terribly

bored.

 

You keep talking,

although I was not

finished with that

sentence

yet.

 

I am watching your words

drop like dead leaves

you point at them with one hand

and cover my mouth

with the other

But getting drunk,

laid, and rich

are not my super powers.

And I can’t dumb

my vocabulary

down

any lower.

 

I turn to look

at the front door behind us

and nearly choke on the

claustrophobia

in my throat.

It’d be a really great offer

if I didn’t have a soul.

Water from your lawn

runs down

the cul-de-sac

lined with desolate

cages.

I escape to the driveway

where my gas gauge

is empty

but my wings?

My wings

are fully extended.

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Written by
diane-1
Published
May 7, 2016
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