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I breathe you in like a morning Cigarette. Trying to remember all I must forget; Touching my cheek as I’m crying because a piece of my soul is… Funny how love burns like those Early morning drags. The red line recedes with each new pull all good things come
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Jun 21, 2018
Jun 21, 2018 at 3:31 AM UTC
Morning Burn
I breathe you in like a morning Cigarette. Trying to remember all I must forget; Touching my cheek as I’m crying because a piece of my soul is… Funny how love burns like those Early morning drags. The red line recedes with each new pull all good things come
Second draft... not sure if it's much better than the first. Editing suggest are much appreciated.
#love#loss#smoke#dark#soul
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elizabeth-31
27/F/Florida
Jun 21, 2018
Jun 21, 2018 at 3:31 AM UTC
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