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the alcohol lined up with stacked pill bottles, sobbing a dark cloud lays upon me your knock on the door, snap back to the moment, wipe away and answer with a smile, you were silly and carefree, for a moment my heavy heart lifted and your laughter saved my life.
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Aug 13, 2025
Aug 13, 2025 at 11:16 AM UTC
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the alcohol lined up with stacked pill bottles, sobbing a dark cloud lays upon me your knock on the door, snap back to the moment, wipe away and answer with a smile, you were silly and carefree, for a moment my heavy heart lifted and your laughter saved my life.
I don't always put descriptions but this one needs it. The closest I ever got to ending it all my brother interrupted my plans, said some real stupid and light nonsense to me, left, and to this day he has no idea he straight up saved my life. It's beautiful, the way fate weaves itself through the fabric of life.
Lucida
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31/A/USA
Aug 13, 2025
Aug 13, 2025 at 11:16 AM UTC
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