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Jesus Christ, that's a pretty face To indite such a sight is border line sin
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 9:42 PM UTC
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Jesus Christ, that's a pretty face To indite such a sight is border line sin
I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!
jay-forrest
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 9:42 PM UTC
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