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You are on a very long list of those who can’t though they persist. Learn the lesson of Achilles heel: there's something that doesn't want you here. You hold tightly the images of misguided faith, role models and illusory joy. But graven images topple as slow as dry rot and Pandora quietly fills your box of toys. Your house is projected and frozen in time. Twenty layers of wallpaper are peeling your mind. Rooms untouched like 100-year-old Mason jar preserves. You can't eat fruit kept for so many years. Your choice of worlds kept the patterns; no new beginnings mean the same old ends. You may not break all the rules, but you sure make them bend. Grace seemed to touch you as you walked a mile or two seemingly content. But no matter how amazing the grace was, you can't be where you never went. As long as scapegoats hang on crosses all along this highway like rows of pigs hanging bloodless at the slaughterhouse, and as long as Western religious pop culture icons and other social images replace what is real, the roadblocks and washouts will continue to keep you there. Achilles protected everything but his heel.
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Jun 26, 2025
Jun 26, 2025 at 8:57 PM UTC
Seeking Without for What Can Only Be Found Within (Achilles Heel)
You are on a very long list of those who can’t though they persist. Learn the lesson of Achilles heel: there's something that doesn't want you here. You hold tightly the images of misguided faith, role models and illusory joy. But graven images topple as slow as dry rot and Pandora quietly fills your box of toys. Your house is projected and frozen in time. Twenty layers of wallpaper are peeling your mind. Rooms untouched like 100-year-old Mason jar preserves. You can't eat fruit kept for so many years. Your choice of worlds kept the patterns; no new beginnings mean the same old ends. You may not break all the rules, but you sure make them bend. Grace seemed to touch you as you walked a mile or two seemingly content. But no matter how amazing the grace was, you can't be where you never went. As long as scapegoats hang on crosses all along this highway like rows of pigs hanging bloodless at the slaughterhouse, and as long as Western religious pop culture icons and other social images replace what is real, the roadblocks and washouts will continue to keep you there. Achilles protected everything but his heel.
©2025 Daniel Tucker All Rights Reserved. Notes. Dedicated to everyone who struggles with society's myriad addictions. You cannot get out of these traps until you start dumping your alibis. (I guess the Addictions Counsellor still lives in me).
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Jun 26, 2025
Jun 26, 2025 at 8:57 PM UTC
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