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The damp world, slowly yet ardently wiping itself off from the previous evening’s unannounced showers, Blew a feathery breeze, kissing my skin with ghostly lips. As the air’s playfully gentle push spirals about the atmospheric arena, A lightening overcast desperately strains it’s diminishing predominance, Fraudulently struggling to keep a hold over what it never owned. But as all things come to a close, the clouds were no exception, For the articulate wind maiden seduced the cloudscape, And spread a delicate gap among the once steadfast scenery. The further I wander, The further I shall ponder. I had always dived so deep Into my abyssal mind, That I never once noticed A material bliss, such as this, Could have ever existed.
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Dec 15, 2019
Dec 15, 2019 at 3:43 PM UTC
An unnoticed planet
The damp world, slowly yet ardently wiping itself off from the previous evening’s unannounced showers, Blew a feathery breeze, kissing my skin with ghostly lips. As the air’s playfully gentle push spirals about the atmospheric arena, A lightening overcast desperately strains it’s diminishing predominance, Fraudulently struggling to keep a hold over what it never owned. But as all things come to a close, the clouds were no exception, For the articulate wind maiden seduced the cloudscape, And spread a delicate gap among the once steadfast scenery. The further I wander, The further I shall ponder. I had always dived so deep Into my abyssal mind, That I never once noticed A material bliss, such as this, Could have ever existed.
Here is my sorry attempt at a different style of writing, with personification and heavier description. If you got this far, thank you for bearing with it.
Ayn
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20/M/Wherever I May Roam
Dec 15, 2019
Dec 15, 2019 at 3:43 PM UTC
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