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Ganges drying mud Armed hungry thirsty tide Self-Grandiose hang dead Money-ed bunkered islands Generations despair, lost .
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Apr 26, 2010
Apr 26, 2010 at 11:16 PM UTC
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Ganges drying mud Armed hungry thirsty tide Self-Grandiose hang dead Money-ed bunkered islands Generations despair, lost .
copyright©[email protected] 2010 Inspired by my poem 'BORN SCREAMING...' which succinctly weaved a complex story around 1950’s baby boom survivors. It’s pace, detail and depth coming from the listing parallel structures, alliteration and then the patterning in the three linked adjectives (e.g. armed-hungry-thirsty) in the last lines of the final two stanzas.
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Apr 26, 2010
Apr 26, 2010 at 11:16 PM UTC
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