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Fantastic Planet

If you live on the Fantastic Planet

Some days

You feel steel on your scalp

and steel in your palms

 

You are the evolved, and the constantly evolving

Rapid; rapid; rapidly

And we live with steel on our necks

and sonic waves booming

from our chests and temples.

 

We were under the impression of evolution

we were living with evolutionary spectacles

covering our irises until they were torn

and we were naked

and our Garden of Eden was our impression

of our stance and state

 

The charts were rapidly running;

like a film.

We were getting left behind in our caves

with our left hands and our flat-feet.

We ran faster than we had need to

Till we were inhaling particles;

atoms that had not existed when we were still the spectacle

And we brought them out of their Fantastic Planet

and they brought us out of our sleep.

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hana-grace-wiebe
Canadian
Published
Jul 19, 2011
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