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confirmation

an oval antique photograph

from the century just passed

six youthful brothers

must be sunday dressed

exuding life and promise

facing forward all in line

symmetry pervading

sister mary in their center

 

on the photos right

a startling recognition

an image seen before

colins great grandfather

raymond often ray

in features and a gaze

seemed as colin

would have stood

 

photo has a crease

fading but still clear

now with photos recent

privileged to compare

colin next to ray

both fully present

yet a gaze away

 

rays gaze anticipating

army time in paris

fortune seeking in the west

fortunes to be found

four generations branching

to colin and beyond

 

colins gaze capturing

a journey now beginning

does he see montana paris

or the stars

repeating patterns forward

reflect photographic truth

 

music completes the pattern

with colorings of sound

rays trumpet and harmonica

introducing a guitar

which colin has absorbed

 

thus in his confirmation

new dimensions

now foreseen

confirming four generations

reflecting many more

expanding light and love

carrying our gratitude

for the glimpse

an old photograph

favored us

to find

 

(poem written for my grandson's

confirmation....)

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Written by
charlesc
American
Published
May 9, 2012
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