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propellant in motion add a spark of metal on metal ripped by a jagged                                          hole in this community, with friction-less speed and it all goes down hill So much fuel and flame, so much tears and ( who gets the blame, )                          not now pull together in humility so much sadness, such visible courage and strength. Every one knew everyone, they will be missed by all, the cloud will not be forgotten as it tried to carry your friends               and family away the rolling blackness the cars filled with blackness will not remove them from your memories When the rain comes, when the tears have emptied out, and if ever your grieving hearts feel all alone            just say the time it happened, out loud and some one who hears will be by your side to wipe the tears and be still                             with you, in love of those,                   until you are ready to go on again, and again                                                                             resiliente
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Jul 9, 2013
Jul 9, 2013 at 2:08 AM UTC
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propellant in motion add a spark of metal on metal ripped by a jagged                                          hole in this community, with friction-less speed and it all goes down hill So much fuel and flame, so much tears and ( who gets the blame, )                          not now pull together in humility so much sadness, such visible courage and strength. Every one knew everyone, they will be missed by all, the cloud will not be forgotten as it tried to carry your friends               and family away the rolling blackness the cars filled with blackness will not remove them from your memories When the rain comes, when the tears have emptied out, and if ever your grieving hearts feel all alone            just say the time it happened, out loud and some one who hears will be by your side to wipe the tears and be still                             with you, in love of those,                   until you are ready to go on again, and again                                                                             resiliente
pour Lac-Megantic, Soyez assuré de mes pensées et prières (my French is rusty)
darrell-wade-elverum
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Jul 9, 2013
Jul 9, 2013 at 2:08 AM UTC
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