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She tips the bottle like it’s a volume button, hoping silence comes in liquid form. The voices crowd her ribs, echo off the walls of her skull, tell her she is not enough, tell her she is too much. She doesn’t want the drink — she wants the quiet. Just a moment where her mind loosens its grip. But somewhere beneath the noise, a softer voice waits — not loud, not cruel — just patient. It whispers: You are tired, not broken. You need help, not hiding. And maybe one day she will pour the bottle out and let someone hear her instead.
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 7:15 AM UTC
Too Loud
She tips the bottle like it’s a volume button, hoping silence comes in liquid form. The voices crowd her ribs, echo off the walls of her skull, tell her she is not enough, tell her she is too much. She doesn’t want the drink — she wants the quiet. Just a moment where her mind loosens its grip. But somewhere beneath the noise, a softer voice waits — not loud, not cruel — just patient. It whispers: You are tired, not broken. You need help, not hiding. And maybe one day she will pour the bottle out and let someone hear her instead.
This is my version of how I'd silence the noise in my head... Enjoy
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Apr 2
Apr 2, 2026 at 7:15 AM UTC
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