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Midnight   crashes in thunderclap   headache darkness     spreading a virus black   skin   infection      hear the sea cannot see it mumble in   sigh out night of sonnets melting to   haikus couplets     nothing rubies on my lips    jewels   I've never known on my hand      you made me faint    made my (day)dreams Technicolor whispered villanelles      buried them broken bones   in sand      inhaled your language stored stories    for next time twenty-six   things twenty-six   letters play   pause   repeat play   pause   repeat    craved you smoke/drugs/booze in eyes lost backs of   knees fingers on      spines eleven fifty nine      fifty nine reality soaks through a ****** wound    as the message in the bottle    you sway away fictional     fading    closed
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Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 4:28 PM UTC
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Midnight   crashes in thunderclap   headache darkness     spreading a virus black   skin   infection      hear the sea cannot see it mumble in   sigh out night of sonnets melting to   haikus couplets     nothing rubies on my lips    jewels   I've never known on my hand      you made me faint    made my (day)dreams Technicolor whispered villanelles      buried them broken bones   in sand      inhaled your language stored stories    for next time twenty-six   things twenty-six   letters play   pause   repeat play   pause   repeat    craved you smoke/drugs/booze in eyes lost backs of   knees fingers on      spines eleven fifty nine      fifty nine reality soaks through a ****** wound    as the message in the bottle    you sway away fictional     fading    closed
Written: July 2014. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, another in the ongoing dream couple beach/sea series I am working on. What I am writing about is fictional, and yet extremely vivid in my mind, to the point where it almost feels real - the location, the couple, the textures of everything. Feedback on this poem, and others, is very welcome.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 4:28 PM UTC
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