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When I drove through the city tonight I noticed how quickly I felt alone The gift for you was my only passenger, for you did not take it, since I never saw what you have shown Back and forth back and forth, my fuck-ups, terrible choking you to death as I cry while I eat my food The sweater choking my neck is the last thing to tell me to be good Please take me back to the flying saucer, the gloomy pine bar not-so far, the afternoon afterschool naps groggy with young happy love
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Sep 14, 2015
Sep 14, 2015 at 1:50 AM UTC
Driving Back
When I drove through the city tonight I noticed how quickly I felt alone The gift for you was my only passenger, for you did not take it, since I never saw what you have shown Back and forth back and forth, my fuck-ups, terrible choking you to death as I cry while I eat my food The sweater choking my neck is the last thing to tell me to be good Please take me back to the flying saucer, the gloomy pine bar not-so far, the afternoon afterschool naps groggy with young happy love
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Sep 14, 2015
Sep 14, 2015 at 1:50 AM UTC
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