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There is a line                                                                         That none dare to cross On one side is riches                                                                              On the other is loss The thing that stops them Strikes fear like a wraith It's the "truth" of deception In those who have faith One side is worse                                    But ignorance is bliss                                                                                   You cannot cross over                                                             Or in your next life you'll regress In                there          no                reality                is          line The            line       within only           is     The line has been caste                                                     down But they ignore its abolishment
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Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 3:24 PM UTC
The Line
There is a line                                                                         That none dare to cross On one side is riches                                                                              On the other is loss The thing that stops them Strikes fear like a wraith It's the "truth" of deception In those who have faith One side is worse                                    But ignorance is bliss                                                                                   You cannot cross over                                                             Or in your next life you'll regress In                there          no                reality                is          line The            line       within only           is     The line has been caste                                                     down But they ignore its abolishment
DISCLAIMER: I do not mean to offend anyone by this poem or the meaning behind it. Poetry is raw, which means it can be harsh too. The way I speak of Hinduism in this poem could be considered harsh, and I apologize if it does. EXPLANATION: Okay, so this poem is inspired by the caste system of India which is heavily based on Hinduism. The caste system basically places a person in a caste (or social grouping) based on the family they are born into. The system says that you cannot change your caste (i.e. if your father was a soldier, you have to be a soldier). If you do try to change your caste, it is considered bad karma; you may become a lower being or lower caste in your next reincarnation. The caste system used to be enforced by law, but was legally abolished in 1949. However, due to it being a religious practice as well, it is still upheld by many people in India (specifically the more rural areas). With this poem my goal was to sum up the state of some of the Hindi people of India in relation to the caste system. P.S. Sorry for the essay! :)
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Jul 31, 2018
Jul 31, 2018 at 3:24 PM UTC
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