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Me; Before You, I was Steeping in an invented Self. Comfortably Immersed in Oblivion. You; You looked at me,   With kind eyes, Having seen so much Failure; Nonetheless eager To try. Nonetheless willing To be the Extractor of my Soul; Unclogging the drains Plugged with vile Misconceptions. Filtering the murky mere, Instituting Clearer waters. Affirming that I had been A victim of my Body— An excess of cells, merely Bitter Of their ephemeral Purpose, So concealing the Intellect— That which was Truly sacred. Us; Philosophers; Bathing in our own Blood. Thinking and feeling— Basking in Questions. All for the sake of Some redemption. Claiming an awareness of The world, And dismissing the Futile cycle of Our mission. Nonetheless, We are eager— Willing To try.
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Nov 17, 2011
Nov 17, 2011 at 5:56 PM UTC
The Origin of Self
Me; Before You, I was Steeping in an invented Self. Comfortably Immersed in Oblivion. You; You looked at me,   With kind eyes, Having seen so much Failure; Nonetheless eager To try. Nonetheless willing To be the Extractor of my Soul; Unclogging the drains Plugged with vile Misconceptions. Filtering the murky mere, Instituting Clearer waters. Affirming that I had been A victim of my Body— An excess of cells, merely Bitter Of their ephemeral Purpose, So concealing the Intellect— That which was Truly sacred. Us; Philosophers; Bathing in our own Blood. Thinking and feeling— Basking in Questions. All for the sake of Some redemption. Claiming an awareness of The world, And dismissing the Futile cycle of Our mission. Nonetheless, We are eager— Willing To try.
Jayelbe
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Nov 17, 2011
Nov 17, 2011 at 5:56 PM UTC
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