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I poured a drop of water on my daisy and watched for it to bloom It didn't sprout fast enough so I sprinkled away with an extra helping of water To follow up, I fertilized Still, it was not as colorful as it seemed it was meant to be I doted on it Extra sunshine Extra dirt Extra air But didn't you know that plants could talk? It shook one of  its leaves at me, another one was like a hand perched upon its stem as it glared at me without eyes Its golden mane of petals surrounded its pale, flowery face like a halo surrounds the sun and it said "Are you trying to **** me?" "Did you ever hear of killing someone with kindness?" "Thank you for your good intentions, but....they aren't that good" "Let me grow" "Let me be for now" "Let me come into my own" I heeded it's advice never noticing it nearly withered and shriveled in its fight but then I backed off and before I knew it the flower bloomed to height! Ok, so this didn't really happen But the moral of the story is...... Sometimes, you have to stand back and let things happen on their own as you can be more of a hindrance than you are a help A lesson, I had to learn in life
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Aug 25, 2010
Aug 25, 2010 at 7:34 PM UTC
Are You Trying to **** Me? (A Flower's Tale)
I poured a drop of water on my daisy and watched for it to bloom It didn't sprout fast enough so I sprinkled away with an extra helping of water To follow up, I fertilized Still, it was not as colorful as it seemed it was meant to be I doted on it Extra sunshine Extra dirt Extra air But didn't you know that plants could talk? It shook one of  its leaves at me, another one was like a hand perched upon its stem as it glared at me without eyes Its golden mane of petals surrounded its pale, flowery face like a halo surrounds the sun and it said "Are you trying to **** me?" "Did you ever hear of killing someone with kindness?" "Thank you for your good intentions, but....they aren't that good" "Let me grow" "Let me be for now" "Let me come into my own" I heeded it's advice never noticing it nearly withered and shriveled in its fight but then I backed off and before I knew it the flower bloomed to height! Ok, so this didn't really happen But the moral of the story is...... Sometimes, you have to stand back and let things happen on their own as you can be more of a hindrance than you are a help A lesson, I had to learn in life
from 1996...........but fixed up
dorothy-anderson
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Aug 25, 2010
Aug 25, 2010 at 7:34 PM UTC
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