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I see you, struggling, fighting, loosing I see you aching, breaking, fading I see you. I feel you, hurting, sinking, vanishing I feel you crashing, yearning, dying I feel you. I look at you and I see me, Whose faint breaths echo. I look at you and I see me, Ready, set, and will at the meadow.
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Oct 8, 2020
Oct 8, 2020 at 8:54 AM UTC
Ready, set, and will at the meadow
I see you, struggling, fighting, loosing I see you aching, breaking, fading I see you. I feel you, hurting, sinking, vanishing I feel you crashing, yearning, dying I feel you. I look at you and I see me, Whose faint breaths echo. I look at you and I see me, Ready, set, and will at the meadow.
These were my first thoughts as my subconscious watched my body slowly pass through a near-death experience. I have had many different explanations of what I felt… but to me, it still lingers, slowly opening up!
#death#love#trauma#strong
layalcharara
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layalcharara
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Oct 8, 2020
Oct 8, 2020 at 8:54 AM UTC
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