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The sweet release I bid to rise It will not please To me, I call the time I pause. The sweet silence Oh how I pray for more. Why must all this violence **** those in all their core? I bid to thee, "Why can't I flee to see the mournful sky?" I pause. His silence kills me slowly, Small breaths and simple sighs I try my best to just know why. The carriage falls, I've fallen ill. My mother calls, But to him I will. I weep and whimper "Save me please!" But his laughs escape And kills me under. The sweet release Oh how I pray for more.
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Oct 20, 2016
Oct 20, 2016 at 12:16 PM UTC
Sweet Release
The sweet release I bid to rise It will not please To me, I call the time I pause. The sweet silence Oh how I pray for more. Why must all this violence **** those in all their core? I bid to thee, "Why can't I flee to see the mournful sky?" I pause. His silence kills me slowly, Small breaths and simple sighs I try my best to just know why. The carriage falls, I've fallen ill. My mother calls, But to him I will. I weep and whimper "Save me please!" But his laughs escape And kills me under. The sweet release Oh how I pray for more.
This is something I wrote this week, I ended up adding more while writing the poem originally; still kind of rusty though.
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Oct 20, 2016
Oct 20, 2016 at 12:16 PM UTC
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