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Long has he lived Finding fault as his aim You see he was quite lonely At the start just a game A new target he'd choose For every new session But as his game progressed It became his obsession Well now he can't stop He's grown a negative mind And everywhere that he looks The more mistakes does he find There's become nothing of beauty In his life there's no joy Now he wishes he'd never Begun this game as a boy
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Aug 31, 2016
Aug 31, 2016 at 10:21 AM UTC
The Defect Detector
Long has he lived Finding fault as his aim You see he was quite lonely At the start just a game A new target he'd choose For every new session But as his game progressed It became his obsession Well now he can't stop He's grown a negative mind And everywhere that he looks The more mistakes does he find There's become nothing of beauty In his life there's no joy Now he wishes he'd never Begun this game as a boy
brian-mclaughlin
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Aug 31, 2016
Aug 31, 2016 at 10:21 AM UTC
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