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When I left this grey place eons ago and the sun turned to water under my feet the sky spit out seven horseshoes hitting our heads in predictable defiance and the sand turned to wind the laughter to salt when the world opened up Was it really my fault? The walls worn under my feet in the snow who dares think badly back the greyness left my dry blind eyes and the haze was replaced with black the sun sets on a cloudless skyless day and rises on forgotten lands of warmth trying to reach down and touch what it lost too high up now We’re all too dead.
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Jan 31, 2019
Jan 31, 2019 at 9:47 PM UTC
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When I left this grey place eons ago and the sun turned to water under my feet the sky spit out seven horseshoes hitting our heads in predictable defiance and the sand turned to wind the laughter to salt when the world opened up Was it really my fault? The walls worn under my feet in the snow who dares think badly back the greyness left my dry blind eyes and the haze was replaced with black the sun sets on a cloudless skyless day and rises on forgotten lands of warmth trying to reach down and touch what it lost too high up now We’re all too dead.
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Jan 31, 2019
Jan 31, 2019 at 9:47 PM UTC
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