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when narrow blinded eyes draw out their hunting gear leave traces of their feat just as a souvenir all eyes near and far shadows mine which hunt leering as i bend bending as i turn bodies as cold as dead spiral against my own as if a lonely rock bears whirling storms alone sing praises of this flesh my ageing hollow corpse savor this luscious treat slip into this warp into a sightless knot all in the name of fun buildup a love all fake romance my skeleton if time may blind all reason although few eyes may roll bring yourself inside me come love this wretched soul
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Oct 22, 2013
Oct 22, 2013 at 8:23 AM UTC
magdalena
when narrow blinded eyes draw out their hunting gear leave traces of their feat just as a souvenir all eyes near and far shadows mine which hunt leering as i bend bending as i turn bodies as cold as dead spiral against my own as if a lonely rock bears whirling storms alone sing praises of this flesh my ageing hollow corpse savor this luscious treat slip into this warp into a sightless knot all in the name of fun buildup a love all fake romance my skeleton if time may blind all reason although few eyes may roll bring yourself inside me come love this wretched soul
based on Maria's character from Paulo Coelho's novel Eleven Minutes.
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Oct 22, 2013
Oct 22, 2013 at 8:23 AM UTC
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