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Does she sound so sweet Unless she disappears like heat But she's a mirror outside Underneath, she'll mysteriously hide Queuing for something Unless she's bored with me Everyone bores of me She is the sound of silence Elder to all and some Not a chance to be I just want to be happy Oh, she won't see me Rather you left again
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Feb 16, 2014
Feb 16, 2014 at 11:50 PM UTC
Meaningless Words, Meaningful Letters
Does she sound so sweet Unless she disappears like heat But she's a mirror outside Underneath, she'll mysteriously hide Queuing for something Unless she's bored with me Everyone bores of me She is the sound of silence Elder to all and some Not a chance to be I just want to be happy Oh, she won't see me Rather you left again
Too much focus on style having substance.
papa-ghost
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Feb 16, 2014
Feb 16, 2014 at 11:50 PM UTC
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