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I want you to, I want you to, care, fully, read, understand, and love, things like, my favorite books. Like what you read between the lines… the feelings that seem to emerge from reading a combination of words, are about something bigger than you, and I. Its just, I want myself to desperately stop, the constant feeling of not being able to breathe and writing, It seems like an endless trap filled with blinking cursors and an empty pages about sweet nothings, and memories that you, that you…made sure stayed between us like unspoken promises. Its complicated I want you I want you to feel to love those things that made me like the flaws and imperfections… I I understand the feeling of drowning now, I desperately do, because now you know what its like to really know, love people like you… you. Its complicated. I want you to I want you to Want me. Know what it feels to not be able to breathe.
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Oct 18, 2014
Oct 18, 2014 at 12:25 AM UTC
Read Between My Lines
I want you to, I want you to, care, fully, read, understand, and love, things like, my favorite books. Like what you read between the lines… the feelings that seem to emerge from reading a combination of words, are about something bigger than you, and I. Its just, I want myself to desperately stop, the constant feeling of not being able to breathe and writing, It seems like an endless trap filled with blinking cursors and an empty pages about sweet nothings, and memories that you, that you…made sure stayed between us like unspoken promises. Its complicated I want you I want you to feel to love those things that made me like the flaws and imperfections… I I understand the feeling of drowning now, I desperately do, because now you know what its like to really know, love people like you… you. Its complicated. I want you to I want you to Want me. Know what it feels to not be able to breathe.
This ended up sounding like how I speak when I have too many thoughts to form anything coherent. Three poems in one.
amanda-clarity
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Oct 18, 2014
Oct 18, 2014 at 12:25 AM UTC
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