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No one can say what it was like (when we fell in love) before the universe After the big bang, they say, it inflated faster than anything ever has Faster than light Space ballooned by wild orders of magnitude, precipitating existence (your rose petal lips) It only happened once, this inflation, then the universe hit its stride Only once, (when we touch) but that was all it took for the stars to shine
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Sep 26, 2012
Sep 26, 2012 at 1:25 AM UTC
The Starry Skies Above
No one can say what it was like (when we fell in love) before the universe After the big bang, they say, it inflated faster than anything ever has Faster than light Space ballooned by wild orders of magnitude, precipitating existence (your rose petal lips) It only happened once, this inflation, then the universe hit its stride Only once, (when we touch) but that was all it took for the stars to shine
Playing around quite a bit with parentheses lately, comments on them? A bit of an experimentation inspired by EE Cummings.
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Sep 26, 2012
Sep 26, 2012 at 1:25 AM UTC
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