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I stood there frozen with societal protocol doubt and, of course, indecision. The artificial candle flicker of the subway windows illuminated my eyes as I stared into the car looking for an assured lost cause. But there you were– all softness and light contrasting with the harsh cold I stood in frozen while your subway passed.
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Jan 9, 2012
Jan 9, 2012 at 10:27 PM UTC
Frozen
I stood there frozen with societal protocol doubt and, of course, indecision. The artificial candle flicker of the subway windows illuminated my eyes as I stared into the car looking for an assured lost cause. But there you were– all softness and light contrasting with the harsh cold I stood in frozen while your subway passed.
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Jan 9, 2012
Jan 9, 2012 at 10:27 PM UTC
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