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You Were Standing the First Time

A man of twenty

Looks much younger

Waiting at the southside bus station in a

Suit and sneakers,

Hat strings

Dangling into his collar,

Anxious with his hands idle.

 

A man holding my bags and waist

On a subway train that

Shakes our bodies closer

Looks his age and older,

Holding us still.

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brynn-champney
American
Published
Jun 12, 2010
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