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it’s like that the beatles v. stones or the *** pistols v. the ramones question, i know that hendrix was pure at 27 (joining the haloed crowd fronted by the quasi back in black femme fatale), but he was simply a virtuoso, what i got was melody from kravitz: the piano and the drums, got me tapping, air pianist that i am for the drums on my collar bone, and it was all pristine blue one sunday afternoon, i stopped dreaming, ushered into a pauper artist definition, and felt more love than i could have wishbone’d, or fortune cookie’d for that matter, because i knew, there and then: the world can end with someone crucified forcing the atom bomb explosion on a postcard from 34 a.d., but only because there’s ******* and worship involved, the last man to bend the knees of others readied himself for torture admiring the pyramids hoping for a revival, and he got it, the near extinction of ourselves, tortured and crucified, instigator of celebrity culture, the posing duck-faced messiah with hands spreading and soaring across the entire diameter we call the equator. you can surely end the world, listening to the dirges of the egyptians with sympathy about how a thousand miles of living love built a monument of death, and then invert in the vortex of ***** love love that’s tortured the additive of missing jealousy - three thousand phalluses entered and one more - but still the greengrocer felt no metal on the finger readied; because who would be jealous of a ****** love when so many noble women debased themselves to ******* and false prophesying of men? let’s end it with: lenny’s my love stands shoulders above in height above any hendrix output, it is above whatever lottery wish in tremor of finger aching crossed could ever burn to with a guitarist doing crescendos in a#, or toothing the horse’s mane; ‘cos kravitz is a lyricist and not a virtuoso - as his piano signatures prove - genteel; hendrix give me your best signature rhythmic rubric! oh wait, you can’t, ‘cos so so much solo!
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Sep 27, 2015
Sep 27, 2015 at 10:20 AM UTC
it's like that beatles v. stones question
it’s like that the beatles v. stones or the *** pistols v. the ramones question, i know that hendrix was pure at 27 (joining the haloed crowd fronted by the quasi back in black femme fatale), but he was simply a virtuoso, what i got was melody from kravitz: the piano and the drums, got me tapping, air pianist that i am for the drums on my collar bone, and it was all pristine blue one sunday afternoon, i stopped dreaming, ushered into a pauper artist definition, and felt more love than i could have wishbone’d, or fortune cookie’d for that matter, because i knew, there and then: the world can end with someone crucified forcing the atom bomb explosion on a postcard from 34 a.d., but only because there’s ******* and worship involved, the last man to bend the knees of others readied himself for torture admiring the pyramids hoping for a revival, and he got it, the near extinction of ourselves, tortured and crucified, instigator of celebrity culture, the posing duck-faced messiah with hands spreading and soaring across the entire diameter we call the equator. you can surely end the world, listening to the dirges of the egyptians with sympathy about how a thousand miles of living love built a monument of death, and then invert in the vortex of ***** love love that’s tortured the additive of missing jealousy - three thousand phalluses entered and one more - but still the greengrocer felt no metal on the finger readied; because who would be jealous of a ****** love when so many noble women debased themselves to ******* and false prophesying of men? let’s end it with: lenny’s my love stands shoulders above in height above any hendrix output, it is above whatever lottery wish in tremor of finger aching crossed could ever burn to with a guitarist doing crescendos in a#, or toothing the horse’s mane; ‘cos kravitz is a lyricist and not a virtuoso - as his piano signatures prove - genteel; hendrix give me your best signature rhythmic rubric! oh wait, you can’t, ‘cos so so much solo!
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