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Thoughts unfurl like smoke. You blew a circle of it, your face lay in the centre encircled by the grey, billowing fumes. Beautiful ever-changing, twirling plumes. We accept our fates blindly like mice. Sipping ***** from a jar that once held Ragu. A Frisbee as an ashtray I’m dancing stupidly with you Ol’ detective Gribble who dribbles down the phone and whispers: “sweet nothings” in my ear, I hear.
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Oct 5, 2010
Oct 5, 2010 at 8:36 AM UTC
Nights Together
Thoughts unfurl like smoke. You blew a circle of it, your face lay in the centre encircled by the grey, billowing fumes. Beautiful ever-changing, twirling plumes. We accept our fates blindly like mice. Sipping ***** from a jar that once held Ragu. A Frisbee as an ashtray I’m dancing stupidly with you Ol’ detective Gribble who dribbles down the phone and whispers: “sweet nothings” in my ear, I hear.
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Oct 5, 2010
Oct 5, 2010 at 8:36 AM UTC
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