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I write your name                               in red    sunlight seeps through bottles           on a windowsill    margarine kaleidoscopes          on legs naked for a change (early summer risky business) Floorboards yawn      under the weight of our stories    I take showers         as well as baths now    Can't be twenty-one here older   shush you couldn't tell    Roll my finger    make your piano tingle like when our wrists     bump together     when spines crackle on books bought yesterday     this city   bubbles         all fiction You think monochrome      makes you look better      camera   snap   done jazz sashays around the room     head out a window hear people as nosebleeds                     scrabble about You flirt         (what a discovery) like flowers in a vase    orange juice   bagels ten-plus-ten toes      (A moment where your eyes ache      into mine) I hop stepped jumped into this mess      you know as well as I do      what a delectable mess we are in
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Jun 15, 2014
Jun 15, 2014 at 5:29 PM UTC
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I write your name                               in red    sunlight seeps through bottles           on a windowsill    margarine kaleidoscopes          on legs naked for a change (early summer risky business) Floorboards yawn      under the weight of our stories    I take showers         as well as baths now    Can't be twenty-one here older   shush you couldn't tell    Roll my finger    make your piano tingle like when our wrists     bump together     when spines crackle on books bought yesterday     this city   bubbles         all fiction You think monochrome      makes you look better      camera   snap   done jazz sashays around the room     head out a window hear people as nosebleeds                     scrabble about You flirt         (what a discovery) like flowers in a vase    orange juice   bagels ten-plus-ten toes      (A moment where your eyes ache      into mine) I hop stepped jumped into this mess      you know as well as I do      what a delectable mess we are in
Written: June 2014. Explanation: A poem written in my own time (and there will be more, somewhat similar pieces to this soon.) Something very rare happened, in which I sat and wrote a page of random notes inspired by recurring dreams, and rather than leave it and later alter it into a poem, I just re-shuffled some bits, added some more, and put it on here, so while it is in one sense 'raw', to me it is also rather 'fresh.' Feedback highly welcome and appreciated on this. NOTE: This poem was inspired, but is not directly about somebody.
reece-aj-chambers
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Jun 15, 2014
Jun 15, 2014 at 5:29 PM UTC
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