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(Translation found below in notes) Those eyes, those eyes… Ne plus ultra … I just knew that I'd seen them before. Those eyes, those eyes … stopped my mind in it's tracks … like a ship that had ran ashore. Those eyes, those eyes … Sui generis … Innocent, soothing, sublime. Those eyes, those eyes … They startled me … that moment they first gazed into mine. Those eyes, those eyes… Nonpareil … throughout thee entire world. Those eyes, those eyes … like the moon so bright … or a magnificent flag unfurled. Those eyes, those eyes … Suaviter et dulce … The eyes of a timeless friend. Those eyes, those eyes … they will find my soul … oh yes, yet again. Those eyes, those eyes … Coelo missus … as I'm sure that thee angels chose. Those eyes, those eyes … sadly missed these days … except when mine are closed. Those eyes … they shimmer … just as my beloved Gulf in the summertime … a brilliant, beautiful green. Those eyes… adorned with orange flecks … like sapphires, adrift in those waves … are truly a site to be seen.
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May 7, 2018
May 7, 2018 at 7:31 AM UTC
Those Eyes In Times Square
(Translation found below in notes) Those eyes, those eyes… Ne plus ultra … I just knew that I'd seen them before. Those eyes, those eyes … stopped my mind in it's tracks … like a ship that had ran ashore. Those eyes, those eyes … Sui generis … Innocent, soothing, sublime. Those eyes, those eyes … They startled me … that moment they first gazed into mine. Those eyes, those eyes… Nonpareil … throughout thee entire world. Those eyes, those eyes … like the moon so bright … or a magnificent flag unfurled. Those eyes, those eyes … Suaviter et dulce … The eyes of a timeless friend. Those eyes, those eyes … they will find my soul … oh yes, yet again. Those eyes, those eyes … Coelo missus … as I'm sure that thee angels chose. Those eyes, those eyes … sadly missed these days … except when mine are closed. Those eyes … they shimmer … just as my beloved Gulf in the summertime … a brilliant, beautiful green. Those eyes… adorned with orange flecks … like sapphires, adrift in those waves … are truly a site to be seen.
This piece composed itself over a 7 year span and came to fruition in October-November of 2017. Trying to write about someones eyes without sounding romantic/mushy is an uphill battle indeed. Try it, I DARE you! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok, here is your Latin lesson for today: NE PLUS ULTRA noun: ne plus ultra The perfect or most extreme example of its kind; the ultimate. "he became the ne plus ultra of bebop trombonists" synonyms: last word, ultimate, perfect example, height, acme, zenith, epitome, quintessence. Origin : from Latin. Literally ‘not further beyond,’ the supposed inscription on the Pillars of Hercules prohibiting passage by ships. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- SUI GENERIS adjective: sui generis Unique. "the sui generis nature of animals" Origin : Latin, literally ‘of its own kind.’ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ NON PARIEL adjective: non-pareil Having no match or equal; unrivaled. "he is a nonpareil storyteller" synonyms: incomparable, matchless, unrivaled noun: non-pareild, unparalleled, unequaled, peerless, beyond compare, second to none, unsurpassed, unbeatable, inimitable An unrivaled or matchless person or thing. Origin : Late Middle English: from French, from non- ‘not’ + pareil ‘equal’ (from popular Latin pariculus, diminutive of Latin par ‘equal’). ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "SUAVITER ET DULCE" Translated from Latin: "Gentle and sweet" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ COELO MISSUS" Translated from Latin: "Heaven sent" -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Say what you will about Latin. If I had written this using the English translations instead of the Latin, it would have NEVER been as good.
Jeff-Gaines
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May 7, 2018
May 7, 2018 at 7:31 AM UTC
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