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Have you sipped a good old fashioned? A perfectly crafted cocktail One that costs 12 or 15 dollars And is made by a man with a mustache? It's sweet at first, almost cloyingly so Sugary and malty and fruity. Underneath the sweet is something sharp The alcohol, the citrus, the bite. Not sour, just bright and crisp. It's a pleasing drink, dancing across the palate. But if you pay close attention, If you really focus, There are the bitter notes, the astringent moments The ones that pucker and hurt. A good old fashioned hides the harshness, Like the memories of a love that walked away.
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Apr 17, 2017
Apr 17, 2017 at 1:03 AM UTC
Old Fashioned
Have you sipped a good old fashioned? A perfectly crafted cocktail One that costs 12 or 15 dollars And is made by a man with a mustache? It's sweet at first, almost cloyingly so Sugary and malty and fruity. Underneath the sweet is something sharp The alcohol, the citrus, the bite. Not sour, just bright and crisp. It's a pleasing drink, dancing across the palate. But if you pay close attention, If you really focus, There are the bitter notes, the astringent moments The ones that pucker and hurt. A good old fashioned hides the harshness, Like the memories of a love that walked away.
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Apr 17, 2017
Apr 17, 2017 at 1:03 AM UTC
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