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Sliding into the bath this morning, Was more an act of defiance Then a ritual act of cleaning, And a pleasurable dalliance. Yesterday — My doctor said (strongly suggested) That I shouldn't have baths, showers are safer, If I ever, on the off chance, seizured, because I forgot to take my medication, Or, as I am trying to do, stop taking them altogether, Aren't the laws of nature good? Just? Complementary?! If I have another, isn't that injustice?! Isn't cleansing the body, an act of worship?! Should I live my life by the law of ‘off chances”? I think not! Today — This bath is my protest. And I am sipping coffee and eating pastries in here, too!
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Jun 20, 2025
Jun 20, 2025 at 7:21 PM UTC
Bath - Defiance
Sliding into the bath this morning, Was more an act of defiance Then a ritual act of cleaning, And a pleasurable dalliance. Yesterday — My doctor said (strongly suggested) That I shouldn't have baths, showers are safer, If I ever, on the off chance, seizured, because I forgot to take my medication, Or, as I am trying to do, stop taking them altogether, Aren't the laws of nature good? Just? Complementary?! If I have another, isn't that injustice?! Isn't cleansing the body, an act of worship?! Should I live my life by the law of ‘off chances”? I think not! Today — This bath is my protest. And I am sipping coffee and eating pastries in here, too!
My original bath piem is here: https://hellopoetry.com/poem/5056024/bath/
bekahalle
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40/F/Australia
Jun 20, 2025
Jun 20, 2025 at 7:21 PM UTC
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