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A life model stands bare at the core of an easel mantle. She wears her skin like a flattering summer dress and I wonder if she even knows she's naked. I transfer her body to paper in a hundred charcoal swirls, suspended evermore in a breath of smoke. My teacher says my style suits me, and I suspect he's right. *They're alive, and full of vitality* he tells me, comparing them to my other, more refined drawings and I feel myself wanting to cry. I try to refine my life, and myself, as I do my models. To be contoured and controlled. To be precise and safe as geometry. I unfold beneath the frustration of my clumsy form. My hands cannot obey to a command my heart does not give. But my heart commands acceptance, and who am I to deny? So I must abide, and learn to wear my messy heart like a flattering summer dress rippling in winters gale. Sewing buttercups into a storm.
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Apr 8, 2017
Apr 8, 2017 at 11:48 PM UTC
Life Drawing
A life model stands bare at the core of an easel mantle. She wears her skin like a flattering summer dress and I wonder if she even knows she's naked. I transfer her body to paper in a hundred charcoal swirls, suspended evermore in a breath of smoke. My teacher says my style suits me, and I suspect he's right. *They're alive, and full of vitality* he tells me, comparing them to my other, more refined drawings and I feel myself wanting to cry. I try to refine my life, and myself, as I do my models. To be contoured and controlled. To be precise and safe as geometry. I unfold beneath the frustration of my clumsy form. My hands cannot obey to a command my heart does not give. But my heart commands acceptance, and who am I to deny? So I must abide, and learn to wear my messy heart like a flattering summer dress rippling in winters gale. Sewing buttercups into a storm.
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Apr 8, 2017
Apr 8, 2017 at 11:48 PM UTC
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