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The old woman was lying on the path from her ground floor flat along Harper Road when you and Helen walked by on your way from the shop with your penny drinks you both ran to her and she said she’d fallen so Helen ran across to the surgery on the other side of the road while you knelt by the woman placing your short sleeved pullover under her head you’re a good boy she said but you’ll have blood on it now don’t matter you said you stroked her head and pushed her grey hair out of her white blue eyes when Helen returned with a doctor he examined the old woman and said he had called an ambulance Helen stood next to you her eyes tearful her hand touching yours the woman said thank you both I don’t know what I’d have done if you hadn’t come along it’s the least we could do Helen said you waited until the ambulance came and took her away and disappeared off along Harper Road look at your pullover Helen said it’s got blood on it don’t matter gives it colour you replied anyway Mum’ll wash it out she gazed at you through her thick lens her eyes awash with tears her small hand still in yours the path from the old lady’s flat had a small stain of dark red where blood had seeped where she’d laid her head a bit like an abstract pavement artist’s work you said the white stone canvas with that touch of red.
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Aug 12, 2012
Aug 12, 2012 at 2:53 AM UTC
GOOD DEED DONE.
The old woman was lying on the path from her ground floor flat along Harper Road when you and Helen walked by on your way from the shop with your penny drinks you both ran to her and she said she’d fallen so Helen ran across to the surgery on the other side of the road while you knelt by the woman placing your short sleeved pullover under her head you’re a good boy she said but you’ll have blood on it now don’t matter you said you stroked her head and pushed her grey hair out of her white blue eyes when Helen returned with a doctor he examined the old woman and said he had called an ambulance Helen stood next to you her eyes tearful her hand touching yours the woman said thank you both I don’t know what I’d have done if you hadn’t come along it’s the least we could do Helen said you waited until the ambulance came and took her away and disappeared off along Harper Road look at your pullover Helen said it’s got blood on it don’t matter gives it colour you replied anyway Mum’ll wash it out she gazed at you through her thick lens her eyes awash with tears her small hand still in yours the path from the old lady’s flat had a small stain of dark red where blood had seeped where she’d laid her head a bit like an abstract pavement artist’s work you said the white stone canvas with that touch of red.
terry-collett
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Aug 12, 2012
Aug 12, 2012 at 2:53 AM UTC
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