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Reflections. Reminders of something In you I dislike about Me. So far from selflessly We pat the shoulders of our Loved ones when they Remind us of our own Rewardable sides. We did good when they did good. We harvest from their Achievements. I suppose mirrors are The eyes of the Soul.
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Apr 29, 2014
Apr 29, 2014 at 4:41 PM UTC
Mirrors and Eyes
Reflections. Reminders of something In you I dislike about Me. So far from selflessly We pat the shoulders of our Loved ones when they Remind us of our own Rewardable sides. We did good when they did good. We harvest from their Achievements. I suppose mirrors are The eyes of the Soul.
Second draft. Hope to have lifted it a bit.
sgholter
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Apr 29, 2014
Apr 29, 2014 at 4:41 PM UTC
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