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The poetry critic, punched in at nine wasn't real sure, if he, was there on time The secretary, was filing her nails reviewing the latest, poetry fails The desks stacked high, and wide stainless and cold, the critics decide Applying arbitrary laws, and sad stricture not able to see, a beautiful picture One foot in mouth, not really that smart just a critical ego, minus, the heart In the end it is said, of poets/poetess and critics one practicing art, the other analytics
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Oct 20, 2017
Oct 20, 2017 at 9:31 AM UTC
No Heart, but Sole, in Mouth
The poetry critic, punched in at nine wasn't real sure, if he, was there on time The secretary, was filing her nails reviewing the latest, poetry fails The desks stacked high, and wide stainless and cold, the critics decide Applying arbitrary laws, and sad stricture not able to see, a beautiful picture One foot in mouth, not really that smart just a critical ego, minus, the heart In the end it is said, of poets/poetess and critics one practicing art, the other analytics
It's easy to criticize, that's why they doo it :D
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Oct 20, 2017
Oct 20, 2017 at 9:31 AM UTC
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