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First I will say you look wonderful Despite being out in the humidity Your spirit remains peppy and full Even over a temperature of ninety Your smile brightens those around Your hair flows freely in the breeze You try to help those that surround Telling them to stop and to freeze You like to be surrounded by peace You're still with some that are a pain Even those like me that tend to tease Now you silly chipmunk orangutang I must ask you one thing before I end Would you, Madelyn, be my girlfriend?
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Jul 24, 2014
Jul 24, 2014 at 4:13 PM UTC
Girlfriend Proposal
First I will say you look wonderful Despite being out in the humidity Your spirit remains peppy and full Even over a temperature of ninety Your smile brightens those around Your hair flows freely in the breeze You try to help those that surround Telling them to stop and to freeze You like to be surrounded by peace You're still with some that are a pain Even those like me that tend to tease Now you silly chipmunk orangutang I must ask you one thing before I end Would you, Madelyn, be my girlfriend?
She said yes! I waited to post this until I asked her.
brett-w
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Jul 24, 2014
Jul 24, 2014 at 4:13 PM UTC
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