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Haze "I invited shrimp if that's ok.?"; That's what he calls his little brother, "sure , if you want too" He's teaching her how to drive today, The car windows are down and it's really warm for May. She is wearing blue jean frayed shorts, white cotton pull over, peasant style , the kind that straps won't stay up on sandals reveal new manicure in hot pink. Her hair is pulled up off her neck with a claw, tendrils a drift. She's never met her boyfriend's brother, she expects young, gangling, annoying. She starts the engine and honks the horn, the car smells of octane and dust motes and heavy aftershave. She likes the smell. The door opens and poetic attitude plops into the front seat. Shrimp is smooth, buff and not at all what she expected. He slams the door and she starts to drive. The young men exchange words, brother barbs she is driving as if she had always known how. Onto the highway, the breeze feels good, it's lazy and hazy in the car, she leans forward too short in the seat to see well, she adjusts the wheel. A strap falls from her shoulder, with a matching manicured hand she slides it back up, no tan line. Shrimp is feeling the heat, blowing hard through his teeth, feels the energy drip in the air, looking at the girl, his brother's girl. She's got great shoulder blades, long neck, he leans back arms thrown over the seat, chest puffed out like he owns the world, watching, watching his brother's girl. He sees the strap drop, the retrieve , her leaning up, a little more of her back exposed, she's hot and glistening in the heat, lovely shoulders, great angles. He pulls out his pen, leans over to her, pulls her strap down again, the breeze wafts of her perfume around him, the front seat, she, smells like baby powder and jasmine. Hand on the wheel , hand to hold up the front of her blouse she's helpless and he pulls the elastic down in the back. stretches it to her waist. Brother sits in the back watching, doesn't say a word. Turns his head to the right and stares at the landscape through the dusty window. Time has disappeared in the front seat, the atmosphere has changed and it's thick and hard to breathe he starts writing on her back with his pen, and in his mind he reads aloud as he writes across her baby smooth brown skin. I heard his voice read as he writes and in his head it said; "Haze, rain on my art, pick a color, pull it apart"
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:10 PM UTC
Haze
Haze "I invited shrimp if that's ok.?"; That's what he calls his little brother, "sure , if you want too" He's teaching her how to drive today, The car windows are down and it's really warm for May. She is wearing blue jean frayed shorts, white cotton pull over, peasant style , the kind that straps won't stay up on sandals reveal new manicure in hot pink. Her hair is pulled up off her neck with a claw, tendrils a drift. She's never met her boyfriend's brother, she expects young, gangling, annoying. She starts the engine and honks the horn, the car smells of octane and dust motes and heavy aftershave. She likes the smell. The door opens and poetic attitude plops into the front seat. Shrimp is smooth, buff and not at all what she expected. He slams the door and she starts to drive. The young men exchange words, brother barbs she is driving as if she had always known how. Onto the highway, the breeze feels good, it's lazy and hazy in the car, she leans forward too short in the seat to see well, she adjusts the wheel. A strap falls from her shoulder, with a matching manicured hand she slides it back up, no tan line. Shrimp is feeling the heat, blowing hard through his teeth, feels the energy drip in the air, looking at the girl, his brother's girl. She's got great shoulder blades, long neck, he leans back arms thrown over the seat, chest puffed out like he owns the world, watching, watching his brother's girl. He sees the strap drop, the retrieve , her leaning up, a little more of her back exposed, she's hot and glistening in the heat, lovely shoulders, great angles. He pulls out his pen, leans over to her, pulls her strap down again, the breeze wafts of her perfume around him, the front seat, she, smells like baby powder and jasmine. Hand on the wheel , hand to hold up the front of her blouse she's helpless and he pulls the elastic down in the back. stretches it to her waist. Brother sits in the back watching, doesn't say a word. Turns his head to the right and stares at the landscape through the dusty window. Time has disappeared in the front seat, the atmosphere has changed and it's thick and hard to breathe he starts writing on her back with his pen, and in his mind he reads aloud as he writes across her baby smooth brown skin. I heard his voice read as he writes and in his head it said; "Haze, rain on my art, pick a color, pull it apart"
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:10 PM UTC
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