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hopeless, helpless, confusing, gloomy have faith dark muggy muggy evening of hopes, oh what an error, how could I, this again and again same old same old, hopeless, helpless, chimera, mirage, don't trust lost, defeated, distant, too far the journey, endless, keep walking featureless, destiny, fate, tired, unclear, ebbing evening light, faceless; let go, less hope, less help, less clear, less light, less known, only less not no hope, no help, not clear, no light, unknown, indecipherable; endless, hopeless, confusing, tired, can't walk, where to go, how, how light is within, destiny, fate, chimera, mirage, nevertheless, endless
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Mar 31, 2016
Mar 31, 2016 at 5:50 AM UTC
3 Lilies
hopeless, helpless, confusing, gloomy have faith dark muggy muggy evening of hopes, oh what an error, how could I, this again and again same old same old, hopeless, helpless, chimera, mirage, don't trust lost, defeated, distant, too far the journey, endless, keep walking featureless, destiny, fate, tired, unclear, ebbing evening light, faceless; let go, less hope, less help, less clear, less light, less known, only less not no hope, no help, not clear, no light, unknown, indecipherable; endless, hopeless, confusing, tired, can't walk, where to go, how, how light is within, destiny, fate, chimera, mirage, nevertheless, endless
Experimental impressionist verse: 3 'lilies' are 3 thoughts of hope and light, which emerge in a wave-like mass of depressing thoughts ebbing and rising in succession .
prabhu-iyer
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Mar 31, 2016
Mar 31, 2016 at 5:50 AM UTC
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