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Paused. The light in the tunnel is blocked. A shadow emerges in silence, & all I smell is death; the stench of rotting carcass lingers. Nearer. The shadow moves - hunched, & stumbles towards me. A penetrating echo vibrates through the tunnel, a cane shunts around puddles. Paused. There is no light - only deaths shadow, me & the putrid water dripping down walls covered in mould; graffiti breathing life into this concrete jungle. Arrested. A man stands - his stare, holds my attention. He sways; the wall & cane prop him up. A fetid smell, exacerbated by wet gangrene, pollutes the air. Paused. "Son, forgive me." © Sia Jane
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Apr 4, 2015
Apr 4, 2015 at 12:55 PM UTC
Skid Row
Paused. The light in the tunnel is blocked. A shadow emerges in silence, & all I smell is death; the stench of rotting carcass lingers. Nearer. The shadow moves - hunched, & stumbles towards me. A penetrating echo vibrates through the tunnel, a cane shunts around puddles. Paused. There is no light - only deaths shadow, me & the putrid water dripping down walls covered in mould; graffiti breathing life into this concrete jungle. Arrested. A man stands - his stare, holds my attention. He sways; the wall & cane prop him up. A fetid smell, exacerbated by wet gangrene, pollutes the air. Paused. "Son, forgive me." © Sia Jane
This was inspired by someone's very raw and honest experiences! It isn't the narrative just my way of trying to step in to another's shoes <3
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Apr 4, 2015
Apr 4, 2015 at 12:55 PM UTC
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