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Into the early hours When we wake up We pour we pour Fill us up Empty agendas For the weak White lines White lies Blowing though our minds Shifting Shaking From toe to hip Blast some more liquor Take the hit Hip hypnotist Head strong Honest Hedonist Buy the ticket You take the ride Wild days Soon will all be over How long till each of us is Sober
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Mar 2, 2013
Mar 2, 2013 at 1:41 PM UTC
Hed honest
Into the early hours When we wake up We pour we pour Fill us up Empty agendas For the weak White lines White lies Blowing though our minds Shifting Shaking From toe to hip Blast some more liquor Take the hit Hip hypnotist Head strong Honest Hedonist Buy the ticket You take the ride Wild days Soon will all be over How long till each of us is Sober
Crap ending so far wanna keep it short and sweet. I think it start's off well capturing the moment although I lose it towards the end! Any suggestions please?
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jack-sneers
Mar 2, 2013
Mar 2, 2013 at 1:41 PM UTC
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