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As we drove in pouring rain a metaphor found me. The excitement rushed through me as the idea of the birth of another poem lit my wiped out morning mind. "Something about how raindrops fall and open up when they hit the window wall; just like them," I thought, "we need to open up when we fall apart." But it was 6:30 A.M. and my mind slipped into a quick nap and hence, this poem instead I trap.
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May 20, 2014
May 20, 2014 at 1:03 PM UTC
6:30 A.M.
As we drove in pouring rain a metaphor found me. The excitement rushed through me as the idea of the birth of another poem lit my wiped out morning mind. "Something about how raindrops fall and open up when they hit the window wall; just like them," I thought, "we need to open up when we fall apart." But it was 6:30 A.M. and my mind slipped into a quick nap and hence, this poem instead I trap.
May.08.2014
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May 20, 2014
May 20, 2014 at 1:03 PM UTC
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