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I met a most exceptional woman; Thought she was a keeper; make me a man, She stirred my soul like no other Made me forget the world even my mother, I opened up again that part of me That I promised no one would ever see, Giving bits at first and then whole Pieces of my heart complete with my soul, She took it all it seemed with eager hands Held mine while I daydreamed of foreign lands We'd visit traverse the continents But in this fairy tale there were holes and dents, I was not to be a lover but a friend Forever until the bittersweet end; She had someone for whom her life was for And I thought it best to close this door But she pried the **** from my fingers And what she said to me on my mind still lingers Declared she needed me as much as he That this was just how it was meant to be and we Would travel this road together This truly made me feel so much better Made me so happy I could cry; She was not just another floater in my eye... © okpoet
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Jan 14, 2013
Jan 14, 2013 at 1:30 AM UTC
Floater...
I met a most exceptional woman; Thought she was a keeper; make me a man, She stirred my soul like no other Made me forget the world even my mother, I opened up again that part of me That I promised no one would ever see, Giving bits at first and then whole Pieces of my heart complete with my soul, She took it all it seemed with eager hands Held mine while I daydreamed of foreign lands We'd visit traverse the continents But in this fairy tale there were holes and dents, I was not to be a lover but a friend Forever until the bittersweet end; She had someone for whom her life was for And I thought it best to close this door But she pried the **** from my fingers And what she said to me on my mind still lingers Declared she needed me as much as he That this was just how it was meant to be and we Would travel this road together This truly made me feel so much better Made me so happy I could cry; She was not just another floater in my eye... © okpoet
nestor-david-armas
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Jan 14, 2013
Jan 14, 2013 at 1:30 AM UTC
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