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God bless the one who PRAYS PRAISE the Lord's heavenly REIGN RAIN on me, then warming RAYS RAISE my soul to a higher PLANE PLAIN and simple, he can HEAL HE'LL save any sinner TOO TO him, surrender yourself WHOLLY HOLY father is for me and you PRAYER oh Lord, can you hear my PLEAS PLEASE shelter me from the RAIN REIGN over me with a watchful EYE I long to make it to your domain
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Sep 26, 2015
Sep 26, 2015 at 8:20 AM UTC
surrender - homophone loop poem
God bless the one who PRAYS PRAISE the Lord's heavenly REIGN RAIN on me, then warming RAYS RAISE my soul to a higher PLANE PLAIN and simple, he can HEAL HE'LL save any sinner TOO TO him, surrender yourself WHOLLY HOLY father is for me and you PRAYER oh Lord, can you hear my PLEAS PLEASE shelter me from the RAIN REIGN over me with a watchful EYE I long to make it to your domain
i know i used rain/reign twice, but the prayer was meant to be a different poem...it seems like few people support, or respect these, but my words to them are, "let's see you write one"
GaryL
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Sep 26, 2015
Sep 26, 2015 at 8:20 AM UTC
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