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The moon was so bright it was as bright as the moon. The stars looked as radiant as stars in the sky. You were next to me, and it felt as if you were near me. And we held hands till they cramped up and were crippled for life. This is so unromantic it's not romantic at all. And it's not very poetic, it's not even poetry. We were lying there under the trees... Trees, Swaying in the wind like my thoughts about butts.
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 6:02 PM UTC
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The moon was so bright it was as bright as the moon. The stars looked as radiant as stars in the sky. You were next to me, and it felt as if you were near me. And we held hands till they cramped up and were crippled for life. This is so unromantic it's not romantic at all. And it's not very poetic, it's not even poetry. We were lying there under the trees... Trees, Swaying in the wind like my thoughts about butts.
Well this was fun.
nakiya-gray
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Feb 16, 2015
Feb 16, 2015 at 6:02 PM UTC
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