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My father is an old truck Sunbleached red Breathes broken bottles A faulty catalytic converter throat All the smoke trapped inside But the nicotine helps his brain function Cinderblock sturdy But skinny A single pillar holding the roof up A man built in a time when you had to tell things it was time to die Leave them in a field somewhere and forget about How do you write a love poem to a car of a man Built in a time without airbags? A car of a man who crashed with you inside so many times You learned about rebuilding from experience From trial and error And how do you forgive a man who can no longer tell you he’s sorry? Trucks Don’t feel Don’t give up Don’t hurt you on purpose Sometimes something inside just breaks And no one catches it And maybe you crash Break a nose Black an eye As far as I know I am not a broken man But I’ve learned where all the parts go And if I am my father’s son A mechanic more often than a car maybe Then I will be fine The truck is dying And beyond repair You forgive it for that It is old and past its time And maybe it can’t say that it’s sorry But there is a field somewhere that you plan on leaving it To collect weeds And rust And be forgotten So you forgive it
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 4:59 PM UTC
What a Mechanic Knows About Forgiveness
My father is an old truck Sunbleached red Breathes broken bottles A faulty catalytic converter throat All the smoke trapped inside But the nicotine helps his brain function Cinderblock sturdy But skinny A single pillar holding the roof up A man built in a time when you had to tell things it was time to die Leave them in a field somewhere and forget about How do you write a love poem to a car of a man Built in a time without airbags? A car of a man who crashed with you inside so many times You learned about rebuilding from experience From trial and error And how do you forgive a man who can no longer tell you he’s sorry? Trucks Don’t feel Don’t give up Don’t hurt you on purpose Sometimes something inside just breaks And no one catches it And maybe you crash Break a nose Black an eye As far as I know I am not a broken man But I’ve learned where all the parts go And if I am my father’s son A mechanic more often than a car maybe Then I will be fine The truck is dying And beyond repair You forgive it for that It is old and past its time And maybe it can’t say that it’s sorry But there is a field somewhere that you plan on leaving it To collect weeds And rust And be forgotten So you forgive it
jon-tobias
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 4:59 PM UTC
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