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When you're smoking in the gloom I'm thinking about your books My fresh air is this brown box I take one cigar and smoke with you Look at the mirror in the center I'm afraid you'll laugh at me We've got part-time jobs on the moon When we're smoking in the gloom My dreams are slowly disappearing Ask your questions, wait for me I'm the one who makes you laugh When we're smoking in the bar Look love! No computer, See the shadows in the air? Would you miss me, love If I'm smoking in the dust? I'm a bit nervous of life Ready just to see your eyes I still need my dry bedroom You're smoking in the gloom My dreams are slowly disappearing Ask your questions, wait for me I'm the one who makes you laugh When we're smoking in the bar
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May 25
May 25, 2026 at 1:31 AM UTC
Gloom
When you're smoking in the gloom I'm thinking about your books My fresh air is this brown box I take one cigar and smoke with you Look at the mirror in the center I'm afraid you'll laugh at me We've got part-time jobs on the moon When we're smoking in the gloom My dreams are slowly disappearing Ask your questions, wait for me I'm the one who makes you laugh When we're smoking in the bar Look love! No computer, See the shadows in the air? Would you miss me, love If I'm smoking in the dust? I'm a bit nervous of life Ready just to see your eyes I still need my dry bedroom You're smoking in the gloom My dreams are slowly disappearing Ask your questions, wait for me I'm the one who makes you laugh When we're smoking in the bar
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23/M/Georgia, Samtredia
May 25
May 25, 2026 at 1:31 AM UTC
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